the kevin's Extreme Disappointment Reads aka DNFs for April 2022
Some books aren't worth finishing. DNFing sets you free! Here's my DNFs for the month of April. It was an unusually good month, with only two DNFs. A Hitman's Forever by BC Robertson My review on Goodreads DNF at 12% I was intrigued by this premise - second chance, enemies to lovers, FBI agent/hitman? Sounds great. Reality has it less so. My issues: 1. The time jumps and associated issues The first chapter starts off by saying “18 years before”. Or maybe 18 years earlier, whatever same idea. We don’t have any other context. It reads like we’re in the head of a child, of maybe 6 to 8 years old, musing on his mother and life. It turns out that the POV character is supposed to be 12 in that segment. Oops. The time jumps themselves - again, all contextless with ages and life. We jump two years, then one year, then two years, then 10 years? mathlady.gif 2. POV issues This is dual first person POV. I can’t tell them apart. Their voices don’t change with age, or scene, or events. ...